Writing Wk 4

  • Write a diary/recount as the boy.  Detailing how he felt about the dog at first and how he feels now. 

17 comments:

  1. once there lived a boy named Joshua he had a missing leg then one day his mother bought a puppy when he looked at his missing leg he got grossed out but at 2nd thought he was actually cool and they lived happily after.

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  2. My mum brought me home a silly dog that had three legs it wouldn't stop playing with me I was trying to my games but then I thought if he could have fun on three legs I could have fun on 1 in a half legs so then we played with s ball

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  3. Jordan TNT company5 November 2017 at 00:32

    one day mum came in the house with a box it got in my way then I opened it was a puppy I was happy but when I saw it had three legs I didn't like it.He ignored it but after awhile he felt guilty he was mean to the dog. So he decided to become his friend, especilly as he only had one and a half legs too.

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  4. Shonteal Cresswell5 November 2017 at 00:51

    maybe the boys mum thought that the boy was playing his game to much and thought that he should have so fun out side so she got him a dog with three legs because him dose out have a full leg.

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  5. Isaac CHICKEN WITHER SKELETON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5 November 2017 at 18:50

    Once there was a person that had one leg gone. One day when he was playing video games his Mum wanted him to get off and open the present that she got him. It was a DOG! he had a missing leg AS WELL. He did not not like him at first but when he started grabbing and chasing a ball he decided to put the controller down and play with him THE END.

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  6. once there was a boy who kept playing video games so his mum decided to get him a precent. he opened the box and it was a PUPPY. He was starting to be happy but then he looked at the leg and he didn't like it the puppy got the ball and he probably realised that if he had one missing leg then he should have a friend with one missing leg to!!!

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  7. I think the boy is in the midle call of duty and wants to play in PRIVAY but his mum has put a giant box in fort of the segnel then the boy opens the box and finds a dog put it only has 3 legs and the boy thows it away in descust and continus playing call of duty but the dog is rattleing around tiying to get a ball from under a shelf. afta the dog has banged its head it gets the ball and pushis it twords the boy but the boy egnors it and kiks the ball in the box it came in and the dog runs at it and gets trapt in the box then it gets out and looks for the ball then it finds it and gos up to the boy this time the boy (sprisingly) puts doun the conthola and gets his cruchrs because he only has 2 legs and grabs the ball and puts it in his pocet and opens the door and thow the ball to his dog. THE END or is it is it it is are you sure? yes now sutup robbie

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  8. I think the boy thought o I have one leg I can't go outside the house but I have to go school even with my only one leg sigh* but its the holidays so I don't have to go to school what a relief I guess I can't do that much with only one leg so I play video games I know video games like with GUNS in it so the boy played videos games the end nah just kidding his mom came back she said o my dear I'm sorry that I'm late the boy din,t say a word because he did not listened to his mother and he was into the game he din,t even noticed his mum so she said hello then he stoped I want you to meet a new animal in our family it is I DOG nah its cat because I don't like dogs then the cat had leg that was gone so the boy thought the cat was useless with a leg away so the cat found a knitting ball so the cat gave the knitting ball to the boy. The boy just kicked to cat. Then the cat was playing by him self you heard that boy the cat does not need you anyway lets get back to the story then the boy felt bad for the cat. Then he told the cat to come so the cat came. Then there were outside happy there lived happily ever after THE END

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  9. jimmy😎😎😱✌7 November 2017 at 21:10

    Once there was a young boy and all he liked doing was playing video games. One day his mum arrived home with a box. He was excited to open it but when he saw the puppy only had 3 legs he didn't want it. The puppy loved to play with the ball and soon the boy realised that having 3 legs didn't stop him from playing. So the boy took his puppy outside to play.

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  10. I think it was a day after the boys birthday and he got an Xbox. His mum hadn't given him his present so since he only had one leg his mum got him a three legged puppy but he was to busy playing on his Xbox to notice. but then he felt bad for the puppy because
    he only one leg and the puppy only had three so they went out side and played. THE END

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  11. Once there was a boy that only had one leg and was addicted to video games. The boy stayed on the video game for the whole day and never paid any attention to his mother. One day his mother wanted him to get of the video games and do something else. His mum thought that buying a dog would get him of the video games. The dog soon arrived at there house and JUMPED OUT of the box!. The boy did not like the dog at first, he only has 3 legs.The dog came back but the boy kicked him away. Soon the dog wanted to go outside to play fetch. The boy then decided to play fetch with his dog and forgot all about the video games, as he realised that been outside is awesome. THE END.

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    1. I think I started this I wrote the longest story in our class so people are starting to write long storys too good job class mates you doing well

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  12. speny❗weny❗😀8 November 2017 at 19:50

    once there was a boy his name was spencer he was playing on his xbox on star wars battlefront but then his mum came home she had brot a dogy he thort it was qut until he saw that it only had there legs then he threw it awy in dis cause then he cept on playing his game then he nitced that it was qut so he went outside and played fech with it. the end

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  13. At first the boy felt like "ooh that dog is so gross it only has 3 legs", then at the end he felt bad for the dog so he went and played with the dog, then it was happy after that because they became friends.

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  14. Briar outta SPACE!!!!!!!8 November 2017 at 23:59

    One day there was boy playing on his Xbox and when his Mom came home she bought a Box inside. Then the boy opend it and he said"Cool!" then he saw the puppy only had 3 legs then hes like "Gross!" then he kicked the puppy way then the puppy saw a red squishy ball. when the pup brought it to the boy hes like's "No go away!!" then the pup started playing with the red ball then the red ball when into the box then the pup went into the box and then the box tiped over on to the top then the pup started moving while the he was under the box. He hit the Tv cab nit and then the boy started laughing then they both went outside and played fetch when the boy got up the pup saw that he only had 1 and a half leg then the boy got his crutches and they both went outside for the rest of the day. The end!!

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