writing week 2

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Write in a narrative story format with a beginning middle and end.

16 comments:

  1. The scuba diver almost got away but the whale shark got it's lie and pulled him. He lived in the whale shark for 2 days but he had an idea it was tickling the whale shark and let it sneeze.

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  2. Shonteal Cresswell23 October 2017 at 00:11

    The scuba diver was looking at something in the sea and a whale shark ate him and he punched his way out.
    and I think whale sharks do not eat people.

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  3. A lifeguard saw a scuba diver swimming with a whale shark but suddenly the whale shark scooped the scuba diver in its mouth. The scuba diver saw parasites cleaning its teeth! There was plankton swimming into his face. The scuba diver acidentally went head first into the whale sharks tonsils, causing it to shoot backwards...the scuba diver was free!

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  4. Isaac CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!23 October 2017 at 19:46

    Once I saw a man swimming in the ocean he was called a scuba diver. One day he was swimming happily and he got SWALLOWED HIM right down the throat. He was stuck in there for half a Mounth. Luckily he was wearing his mask. Then when the whale was eating he rode the fish he had SWALLOWED and escaped...

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  5. One bright sunny day when nothing was happening. The the scuba diver was on his boat and jumped into the sea. When he jumped, he landed on a Whale shark and the Whale shark got angry at the scuba diver, HE SWALLOWED HIM RIGHT UP!. 2 days later, nothing happened he was stuck there forever and ever.

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  6. Jordan TNT company23 October 2017 at 21:41

    Once upon a time there was a person called Jonny. Jonny went on holidays when he got there he went scuba diving then suddenly a whale shark appeared out of no ware the whale shark was not looking ware its going the Jonny tried to swim away but then the whale shark swallowed Jonny he had to eat plankton for 3 days Jonny didint mont to go out the bottom so when the whale shark opens its mouth he will swim out then it opened its mouth so he went out of the whale sharks mouth then went home.

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  7. Once there was a scuba diver. One fine evening after work, while he was scuba diving he got swallowed by a whale shark. A few days later the whale shark ate some food while he wasn't distracted and swam out. His family were delighted to see him again.

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  8. okay okay this makes no sesnse because whales do not shallow
    humans even a killer whale won't shallow a humans so lets make that whale shark to a giant Goliath that shallow people so you got shallowed by a Goliath fish he to escape he wait for the the fish to find another prey like a giant squid then the fish opened his mouth and he escaped but the squid pushed him in then he had another plan is that he trickle his body in the inside because when he does that the fish spits the squid out and spit him out to then he went shreching for land then he made a HOS because a heilocter will get them then after about 5 days later a heilcoter comes to the island then he tolled him were he lived at then saw his friends and family and give them all very BIG hug the end o I forgot some thing what was mmm o I got it was that he went to a camp fire at night and tolled them about his story and his family names were bindhu biu and someone named angel and the divers name was Abel Abraham so you like it

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  9. Once upon a time there was a little girl called Sarah. Sarah was just having nice swim until a whale shark came and ate her (it was the whale sharks breakfast anyway) she fall on consiouse for a year that's when the whale shark died and lucky Sarah had scissors so she tried to cut the whale shark open that didn't work so she punched the her why out and swam back to her island and lived happly ever after but then she died

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  10. speny❗weny❗😀24 October 2017 at 23:48

    one day a scuba diver was swimming around in the sea but then he noticed that there was a whale shark chasing him he thort that it was unusual for a whale shark chasing him but then it opend its mouth and swollen him hole but he stayed alive but he had to find a way out! so he garbed the nive that was clipped on his wetsote it was the nive that he yosed to cut musicals with. then he cut throw the whale shark but then he noticed that his oksigin was getting low so he cut evane harder then he made a hole but then his oksegin ran out then he feinted but he floated up to the top of the sea then a helicopter flew in and picked him up he went strat to the hospital.

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  11. One day there was a sucber diver he was looking for paua when he was deep down under water a whale shark snuck up on him and ate him the sucba diver lived because every time the whale shark would eat fish and whitebait the sucba diver could eat it to and then he lived in there for the rest of his life THE END

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  12. A scuba diver was on the edge of a boat and dived into the water. He was looking around and didn't realise a whale shark came up behind him and wanted to eat him.
    The whale shark ate him and after two days a rescue boat came looking for the scuba diver. It zoomed over the whale shark and the diver swam out.

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  13. Diving with Whale Sharks has been my dream. Finally after many years of saving I had saved enough money to go. Here I am making memories and living my dream.

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  14. Once apon a time there was a scuba diver she loved the water so one day she went into the ocean and she found this new thing called the whale shark.So thats what she called it the "whale shark" and she discovered more things after that and the whale shark and the scuba diver lived in a house and they got married the end!

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  15. SAMUEL AKA firebird xd 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🕊🕊🕊🕊26 October 2017 at 11:17

    The scuba diver narrowly dident get away from the whale shark but it got him. There he was in the whale shark he was in there for 4 DAYS!!! But he had a plan when the shark was going to eat plankton he would mak his escape and he did get out. THE END

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  16. Once there was a scuba diver, he got of the boat and went for a swim after about 30 seconds a whale shark gobbled him up. He was in there for about three days until a submarine came and rescued them. But then he got sucked back in with the submarine. The end.

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